Thanks everyone, I can hear that it's really bad, but I don't intend for it to stay that way.  The biggest obstacle standing between me and a good sound is bow technique and getting relaxed enough to let the bow do it's job without crushing it. I actually sound much better before I press the record button, but as soon as I do, i tense up. The intonation issues are just a matter of practice, particularly in third position, which is what I'm learning now.

@StoneDog  Good quesition and a subject I've been meaning to bring up.  I think we would all like to know what instrument is being played, recording setup etc., when we hear others playing.  In my case it's a FM Concert violin with D'Addario Zyex strings.  I was recording it through an AKG Perception 220 Professional Studio Microphone into an analog to USB converter and recorded using Apple LogicPro recording studio software.

 @Schaick I think any Windows Media Player or Quicktime will play it.  I've been having some Comcast issues with speed though and that could be a factor.  It's an AIF file rather than an mpeg format. You're not missing anything by not hearing it -- except perhaps a slight headache and a vague queasiness,  but it has a much fuller and bolder sound than mice talking. I would think it's more in the realm of what one would here if they had filmed "300" using sewer rats.