It would be helpful to "see" you playing this tune instead of just listening to the soundtrack but for what it's worth, here's my take on what I heard.

1- Awesome ability to keep in time and follow along.

2- Sounded like you could use a little more pressure on the bow as well as...

3- Longer-faster bowing strokes (which help the string to vibrate properly)

4- The intonation was off slightly but you knew that already, and if you can work on #2 & #3 above more, then I think some of that pitch error will disappear on its' own.

All in all, for the amount of time you've been playing... I'm impressed! I can hardly wait to hear your 6 month and 12 month practice tune vids.