I can view both fine. (Of course, I could view the original one with no trouble, also, so I don't know how much that means.)

I hope I'm that good after four years...

I didn't notice that this was in the Critique Corner area earlier.

Honestly, I don't think I know enough about violin to critique her playing. I'll comment on the one thing I noticed.

There were a number of small bobbles in the first minute, which I think were due to nervousness. From the point she hit the pizzacato section at about 1:15 until the end, it seemed good. 

Actually, a second thing. The violin was drowned out by the piano on numerous occasions. Towards the end, the violin got noticeably louder. If that's how the piece is written, there's no issue. If she only played that loud towards the end because she knew she was near the end, it's a confidence issue. She's quite good - she should have every reason to be confident. (I've noticed in my own playing that violins punish you harshly for being hesitant. They like a firm hand.  )

Assuming that was the right dynamic, it brings up a question. I've listened to many violin solos online. Nearly universally, they're accompanied by a piano. Equally universally, they're drowned out by that piano.  Whose idea was this?

I pretty much have to play things from memory if it's going to sound decent. I'm still new enough at all this that if I have to concentrate on anything but my bowing (and a little bit for my fingering), it all goes to hell.  Just takes practice to fix, but I hate sounding horrible, so I memorize whatever I'm going to play. (I don't have all that large a repertoire yet... )

If that was the first time she tried to play something from memory, I'm impressed. It was long, it was demanding (or at least I thought so), and from about the 1:00 minute mark on, it was flawless. (Your daughter may have a different opinion. ) My congratulations to her on a job well done.