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Well you already know about the intonation which sounded good during a few sections (at least to me they did) So if I might suggest. Loosen up the wrist on your bow hand a bit. It kinda looks like you're using your whole arm for each bow stroke as opposed to, from the elbow down. I'm no pro by any stretch of the imagination but I think that your bow control will improve and the "screeching" on some of the string would disappear.
Still, Awesome job! I'm not sure I could play anything that fast I'm certain that when my instrument arrives in the mail I'm gonna be back to searching for the fingering for twinkle twinkle Like I occasionally do when typing
Lookin forward to an "update" video in the near future to mark you're improvements.
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