Yup, I do tend to rush things Emily you are right there, doesnt help forgetting your own tune in various parts as well,what I will probably do is publish it again in a few weeks when It has become second nature, and its not such a mess which at the moment it is, fairly embaressing when I watch it to be honest but thats what practicing something is all about. usually takes me quite a while. Its funny you should post the thing about staccato bowing, I have actually been looking at trying that out, good idea. 

The main reason I have thrown this one together is as a practice for double stops, and shifting, which you have probably noticed already, as well as adding in the blues scale runs, its a bit strange when you can actually have an idea and then have to learn how to play it, I find the two fingered double stops particularly hard but I am now starting to get the hang of them.

I read a very interesting thing about Paganini the other day, apparently he wrote his caprices before he could play them, so maybe there is hope for me yet lol.

Thanks all for the comments, always appreciated. 

Sharon Its a great idea to write it down but I struggle reading music, dont know how I would go about writing it. Its like most of the tunes I write, I usually just play them over and over and hope I dont forget, its like the ones I wrote on the bouzouki, cant remember what I played now if I tried to do it again because I didnt play it again for a good while, may give it a go though.

Emily no need to apologise for anything, you give me some good advice, thats why I posted it in the critiç section, other people see things that I dont. One of the reasons I sometimes take vids down after a few hours is because when I first play back what I have recorded, I think it sounds ok, and then after a few hours when I have disasociated myself from the tune I see all the mistakes, even vids that I have left up I am not really happy with, but thats a case of not having enough years practice under ny belt, if I live long enough I will get good at it, but its frustratingly slow compared to other instruments. When I play things back at first I am actually hearing the tune in my head rather than whats coming from the instrument, only discovered this recently, odd.

Mark, I used ro play a fair bit of rag time picking on guitar at one time, havent really touched guitar since I started on fiddle though. Might record something like the piano player if I get time, I am a lot better on guitar than fiddle, though that doesnt say much lol.

John, thats the idea mate fun, when that stops I will stop playing, cant see that happening though:)