Welcome to the forum @AfekSilonShacham.

You get a video badge for sharing a video of yourself playing.

As for your request for critique, I like to focus on fewer issues at one time so I'll keep mine short. When you perform, it's extremely difficult to make it sound like a performance rather than a struggle, or exercise. A great deal of focus should go towards hearing what you are playing and playing what you would like to hear.
Most peoples nerves get in the way of that.

In doing so, instantaneously your performance becomes more musical.

Listen to your performance with a pencil and sheet music in hand. When you notice that you are too high, pencil in a down arrow, and when too low, an up arrow. This way you learn not to practice the mistakes. When you practice mistakes, you become great at making mistakes. 😁

Thanks for the introduction and for sharing your video.