sounds like inisheer to me @RDP !  Impressive!! yourr doing great on intonation.. a little off on B part but thats expected..ESPECIALLY considering time youve been at it.  Im sure youve been listening to it alot.  playing along with a version helps with timing.... at least the timing of the recprding youre playing to.  But the more times through the better.   Youve got the A part down pretty well..sounds like going from the A to B you were hesitant so the only thing id suggest is to practice just the bar before the transition to the B part and the 1st 2 bars of the B part.   over and over again.  Get that transition down then start playing whole tune again.  Say do a successful transition to B part 5 times then try the whole tune again and see if its easier.  repeqt process until youve got it.  take time as you know.  not saying anything new there.

I wore this version out practicing this..  I liked her dynamics and slides on it.   whatever veraion you like play with it over and over again.  on loop.  hit the notes you can and if you stumble just pick back up wherever the tune is when you can.  dont stop the recording.  it helps.. well it seemed to help me.  dont forget you can slow it down in youtube.   if on a computer there is a custom slider that allows more granular speed selections.